Searria H.

Hey there! How are you enjoying your stay so far? My name is Searria, but you can call me Sea. Don't forget to read the rules under the help and ...

I can't believe nobody has reviewed this yetQ! Very capturing! You mention that her fingers are thin and pale a little too much. Just once or twice is fine. :D ...

Okay. Now this is just freakish. Your drawing is exactly how I picture the dragons in one of my stories!!! I just can't draw them. :( Very good! I would ...

If you didn't want us to correct your grammar or the poem, why did you post it? :? It would have been nice if you separated this into lines. It ...

Interesting poem. I found it rather funny, but also a tad bit sad. I get on to people a lot for this, but you don't have a stable rhyming pattern. ...

This poem was very well-written and beautiful. I agree with kokobeans about those two lines. I would like to give you a suggestion, but I don't want it to ruin ...

First of all, you need to do two reviews before you post anything of your own, then keep a 2 to 1 ratio. The more reviews you do, the more ...

Hallo, Annie! Welcome to YWS. Just remember to write two reviews before you post something of your own and keep a 2 to 1 ratio. You can find all of ...

Well, I didn't see the small version, but I guess this is better. :wink: It's a good angle and the tree adds to it. This is just me, because I'm ...

Nice poem. I'm not much of a poetry writer myself, but we had to do a lot of it in school once. Go on! Say you goodbyes! your I can ...

Do you really hate math that much? :wink: :lol: Very nice piece, really sad. For the first time in my life I feel alone like every one is gone. "every ...

This is truly adorable. I love her pointed little feet! They're so cute!! Bittersweet Also, I want to mention how this faintly reminds me of Madeline... you know, that little ...

Yaay! I finally got time to read this. I was dying all week waiting. Hoorayy! You put your dialogue in quotations this time! Good for you. Sureal has already mentioned ...

It's a nice little story, but it seemed like a bunch of descriptions. The descriptions were excellent, but as Mikedb1492 said, it didn't have any action. The boy walked most ...

Oh. That makes sense now :D